Saturday 28 July 2012

Story x

Hey guys! I know I usually post something a bit, well, different to this, but I thought I might show you the beginning of a story that I wrote. Here goes!!

"Why here?" She asked.
"Why not over there with them?" The girl pointed to a large group of people huddled near an ancient tree covered with berries.
"We're not one of them." Her father said gravely. "Not anymore."
"What do you mean? They're our kind." Said the brave little girl.
"NO! Don't you ever say that again!" Shouted her old father. Obviously having scared his daughter, he lowed his voice into a more calm tone. "We have nothing to do with them. Not now, not ever."
"But, b-b-but... Why?"
"You don't need to know. Just stay AWAY from them. Ok?" He ordered.
"Yes father." She answered glumly. They slowly turned away and picked up their bags which contained things from combs to incence sticks, and walked away from what this curious girl was wondering so much about.

Day turned to night as both father and daughter returned to their new home, and were welcomed warmly by their family.


You like it? There's not much of it, but I thought it was quite good! :D

Bye peeps!
Emma x
 

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